If I had more time on the essay to write I would have added more examples from the works. This would have strengthened my points more. I would have added examples about my life to back up my points about the quote given.
I didn't have any specific concerns after this essay except for the usual ones. I wasn't sure if my point made sense to other people, if it was a strong argument or not, and if it would pass on the AP exam.
I finished the essay in time so i wasn't to concerned about not answering all the questions.
I got pretty lucky because I had just finished my introduction and a few words of my first paragraph so I didn't get interrupted in the middle of a paragraph. I still had to leave my sentence half done but I soon remembered what I was writing after I started reading it.
